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Do I really want to be festive?
Posted: 20 November 2008 Word Count: 40 Summary: My response to 'Christmas' in Flash Poetry
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Battling with inner feelings I set my satnav to 'fun'.
Christmas has to be a time to gel as a family,
problems set aside until this good time becomes real.
Sometimes, just staying at home seems like a wonderful treat.
Comments by other Members
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Posted by :
V`yonne at 22:22 on 20 November 2008
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I'm lucky see. I don't have all this family stuff to do. 
Christmas
has to be a time
to gel as a family, |
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thought you could lose 'has to be' though I suppose the coersion is there.
Sometimes,
just staying at home
seems like a wonderful treat. |
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Home alone that is - hybernating
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Posted by :
joanie at 22:29 on 20 November 2008
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Thanks for reading, Oonah. I'm not sure about your suggestion of dropping 'has to be' as I wanted to convey the compulsion despite the reluctance of family members. Besides all that .........I wanted to keep the syllable count.
joanie
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Posted by :
V`yonne at 22:59 on 20 November 2008
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Yes I recognised that. It does make more sense. You know, I've read that much today, I'm flagging! - can you get poem fatigue? ;
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Posted by :
Nella at 07:57 on 21 November 2008
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I can identify with this, Joanie. Know the feeling well, how nice it is just to stay home. I think you've expressed it well - the compulsion, the fight to make Christmas what everyone thinks it is supposed to be.
Robin
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PS - What's a satnav?
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Posted by :
joanie at 12:06 on 21 November 2008
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Thanks Robin. One of those devices you put in your car and the nice lady inside it tells you where to go. Satellite navigation.
joanie
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Posted by :
BaMc at 16:07 on 21 November 2008
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Puts it so succinctly, 'Battling' against the will to avoid familial festivities!
Apparently some families actually enjoy Xmas together - imagine!
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Posted by :
joanie at 19:07 on 21 November 2008
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Thanks, Barbara! Yes! .... just imagine!
joanie
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Posted by :
V`yonne at 14:16 on 22 November 2008
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Joanie thank you. You know the address to send it to, asap please.
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Posted by :
tractor at 16:30 on 22 November 2008
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Hi Joanie,
good one. Liked the imagery of setting the . From experience I know this internal navigation can also end up driving you into the river.
Cheers
Mark
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Posted by :
DJC at 17:30 on 22 November 2008
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Hi Joanie - know this feeling well. Ah for some time off!!
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Posted by :
joanie at 19:01 on 22 November 2008
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Mark and Darren - thank you! Oonah - it's been sent!
joanie
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