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Stalker

by  rmol1950

Posted: Friday, April 6, 2007
Word Count: 55
Summary: Here is my contibution to the week 54 challenge. It is also an attempt at a 55 word story. Re-written following Irene's helpfull comments.




Frenzied blows shudder the heavy oak door. Then sudden silence. She clutches a knife, pressing her body against the door frame to stop herself trembling. Desperately holding her breath to quell the sobs, to listen. Then a sound of sniffing, and a whisper.
‘Let me in bitch. I know you’re there. I can smell you.’