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Sewer secrets

by  joanie

Posted: Saturday, June 30, 2007
Word Count: 47




Version II

Mirrored
in the paving stones
of a rain-soaked Saturday
he sees
his wasted years flowing
into the gutters

out of sight.


Version I
Mirrored
in the paving stones
of a rain-soaked Saturday
he sees
his wasted years flowing
into the gutters

and out to sea.