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The lament of a lost queen

by  freynolds

Posted: Tuesday, April 28, 2009
Word Count: 76
Summary: This is a very rough short poem I wrote this morning. I thought I'd post something as we are quite quiet at the moment... critiques, please.




I am she,
Pharaoh queen and lover
Forever entwined to my Nile.
Above the remnants of my empire
I see that my present,
my needles, have gone
where once stood proud
others have crumbled.

I err upon a lost kingdom
tears of blood
falling on my beloved land.

What did they do to my story?
I travelled in my own tapestry
dining on pearls
and sweet wines

I kissed a snake, they say,
One too many