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Love in Sharp

by  gard

Posted: Monday, May 24, 2004
Word Count: 168
Summary: playing around with this one still




Love in sharp light

His scent is home made lemonade
His talk is orange and lime
and skin like juice and soft pulp
white pith and tart.

A sharp taste meets tension
in my mouth making my jaw ache
and tiny droplets of moisture
drip slowly around
dimpled surfaces on the washed fruit

I hold in my hand

the dimples and his chin......
spiky blunt hair tickles; ends the moment as we kiss.
He is silent just for a sip while citrus fruit
seems to squeeze from the sky.



V2

Love in sharp light

His scent is home made lemonade
His talk is orange and lime
and skin like juice and soft pulp
white pith and tart.

A sharp taste meets tension
in my mouth making my jaw ache
tiny droplets of moisture drip slowly
around dimpled surfaces on the washed fruit

I hold in my hand

the dimples and his chin......
spiky blunt hair tickles
the taste of marmalade as we kiss
citrus squeezing out of clouds.