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The Stinging Truth/Original

by  Boo

Posted: Friday, July 4, 2003
Word Count: 91
Summary: The 1st exercise in the beginners group.Asked to describe a bed in 100 words slept in as a child.As this was my first exercise it does not use a childs natural language.I'm working on that!





I lay there pensive,gazing at the labyrinth of polystyrene torn tiles that created my refuge.Voices reverberated downstairs.A low monotone tenor interuppted by a shrill and desperate cry.
I huddled into the soft feathery down.Comforted and protected I sank below the surface of my consciousness waiting for dreams to consumemy darkest fears.I moved my arm Tentatively and grasped the solid warm oak of the headboard above.Feeling the familiar map of the uneven grain,I slowly counted the concealed notches beneath.
An eerie silence consumed my sanctuary,as the stinging truthmade it impossible to exhale.....