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Fan

by joanie 

Posted: 11 July 2005
Word Count: 9
Summary: Typing as my hair is blown by a very welcome breeze from an oscillating fan!
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Heat exhausts outside
while here breezes gently cool.
Electricity






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Ticonderoga at 14:33 on 11 July 2005  Report this post
Amazing how much can be conveyed with 9 words. A lesson for us all.


Mike
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Nik Perring at 19:28 on 12 July 2005  Report this post
Cool Joanie, cool. ;)

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joanie at 19:34 on 12 July 2005  Report this post
It was, very! Thanks.

joanie
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jewelsx at 21:09 on 13 July 2005  Report this post
completely captures the moment.
As i type this i am dreaming of owning a fan, maybe next summer!

Beautiful in its simplicity.

Julie
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joanie at 06:53 on 14 July 2005  Report this post
Thank you, jewels!

joanie
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Beanie Baby at 12:50 on 14 July 2005  Report this post
Honest and thought provoking.
Beanie
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