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Making Do

by John G.Hall 

Posted: 25 July 2005
Word Count: 57
Summary: Indian giver...
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Making Do 

what does the making do
but hold you from the cold,

& make sweet fakery pour
onto an old trembling fool,

bitter tears of crocodile beer
pulled from a sacred pump,

lust but lifes chemistry set
for making sex our saviour,

what does the making do
but hold you from you.



JH for JH (c)2005






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Account Closed at 08:58 on 29 July 2005  Report this post
I rather enjoyed this, even though I wasn't very clear as to the meaning. I imagine it's the contrast of age and youth, and trying to come to terms with it - am I right?

A wonderful final couplet!

LoL

A
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