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Shipwreck

by joanie 

Posted: 03 August 2005
Word Count: 40
Summary: Feeling rather devoid of ideas at the moment and clutching at anything.
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Drowning in a sea of adverbs,
buffeted by abstract nouns,
clinging onto adjectival
jetsam, lost in greens and browns,

themes and thoughts float off, elusive
in the waste of ebbing tide.
Oceans brimming over with
creativeness; at least I tried.








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paul53 [for I am he] at 11:40 on 04 August 2005  Report this post
What, no comments? Even with allegedly having nothing to say, you said it very well.
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joanie at 15:43 on 04 August 2005  Report this post
Thanks Paul!
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joanie at 20:49 on 04 August 2005  Report this post
Liesl, thank you. I have been having a look at the site. I will try!

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jewelsx at 16:58 on 06 August 2005  Report this post
This is fab! really simple but it works really well.
Joanie maybe you should run out of ideas more often!
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joanie at 19:08 on 07 August 2005  Report this post
Hi Julie! Sorry, I must have missed your response. Thanks!

joanie
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joanie at 19:10 on 07 August 2005  Report this post
Well, Liesl! Within a couple of days, I have had a mail to say that the site you suggested could use 'Shipwreck'! Thanks for the link.

joanie
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