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The Blue Haired Girl & The Smooth Coated Tiger

by John G.Hall 

Posted: 23 November 2005
Word Count: 135
Summary: Minded love
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The Blue Haired Girl & The Smooth Coated Tiger

You are carefully unfolded out from yourself
the blue haired girl with a sparkler for a tongue,

you are sprawled out beneath the full moon
the smooth coated Tiger with a roaring voice.

These are merely the two sides of the blue you
opened before me, but my magic is too weak
my skin too precious, I must close you up and

practice harder poetry, before I venture nearer
to your spirit's origami, in case my paper cuts
go too deeply into you, or friendship bled dry.

For once and for all the ways there are
I stand to care beyond my carefulness,

minds open and close but freed love stays fixed
the way a star sits in the centre of a Tiger's eye.


John G.Hall(C)2005






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roovacrag at 21:00 on 23 November 2005  Report this post
Powerfull poem,full of strength,heart and soul.
xx alice

Account Closed at 11:29 on 25 November 2005  Report this post
Very Blakean - is that a word?? - and mysterious. Also surreal, which I love. I think it should be "in case", not "incase" and "friendship bleeds dry" rather than "bled dry". Great stuff though!

LoL

A
xxx

Tray at 18:39 on 25 November 2005  Report this post
Hi John,

Love the line:

"the blue haired girl with a sparkler for a tongue,"

brilliant.

Tray x


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