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Cliché exercise - Has beans

by joanie 

Posted: 18 February 2006
Word Count: 24
Summary: Well!! Four short lines and it's taken me all week! (I've been busy)


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It was just a tiny pin-prick
in a barrier for germs,
but alone it changed a tin of beans
into a can of worms.






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paul53 [for I am he] at 12:55 on 18 February 2006  Report this post
Short, but brilliant.
Has beans - and gave stunning reports.

Nell at 12:57 on 18 February 2006  Report this post
Brilliant joanie - less is definitely more!

Nell

joanie at 13:30 on 18 February 2006  Report this post
Foriam and Nell, many thanks! I have to say that I quite little things which one can remember and quote at the drop of a hat! (Ooops! There we go again - another cliché!)

joanie


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I meant to say that I quite like little things!

DJC at 14:18 on 18 February 2006  Report this post
I love this, Joanie - very funny and actually quite profound, for a string of cliches.

Elsie at 14:30 on 18 February 2006  Report this post
Nell, made me smile, funnily enough the cliche thing I'd started also featured a can of worms!

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OOps - Joanie!

gard at 21:52 on 18 February 2006  Report this post
Hi Joanie

nice one ha ha I like it! Clever..

G

joanie at 10:34 on 19 February 2006  Report this post
Darren, Elsie and Gard, thank you!

joanie

Shika at 19:51 on 19 February 2006  Report this post
Brilliant, S

joanie at 21:30 on 19 February 2006  Report this post
Thanks, Shika!

joanie

Mac AM at 12:26 on 20 February 2006  Report this post
Another good stab at the exercise. Nice things come in small packages ...

Mac

joanie at 16:25 on 20 February 2006  Report this post
Thank you, Mac!

joanie

Xenny at 22:15 on 22 February 2006  Report this post
Oh yes, excellent! Well done.

Sorry I'm so late to read and respond

joanie at 10:44 on 23 February 2006  Report this post
Thanks, Xenny! Never too late.

joanie


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