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Ignorance REVISED

by seanfarragher 

Posted: 17 March 2006
Word Count: 331
Summary: Random quotations from the New York Times and Google. The quotation is used as a prompt.
Related Works: Adoration -- for Kate (slight edit) • Broken Toy (revised 27 May 05) • Daily Poem: January 15, 2006 dft1 (from a prompt) revised • Every Season Has Skeletons of Dangling Abuse • Finally Nothing -- • 

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Ignorance

"The multitude of books is making us ignorant." - Voltaire


I have come to America to watch her boil in the sun
with flies and larvae dug into the flesh. Is it possible
that if I were ignorant, and came upon a midnight clear
set down in New Orleans day two of the Hurricane,
would I not recognize despair? Could I walk away,
hide, kill; would I be like the Quaker named
Fox who died a martyr for beliefs unbroken by pain.


Ignorance is "bursting out all over the meadow and the spring."
Watch your step. You are lost in a bloody haze. Read books
at your peril dude, mensch, fraulein and be sure to skip
all the parts that show complexity to be an impossible
puzzle. Let the authorities do it. Let them make your choices
Do not ask questions or you will be turned into salt.

My Pentecostal Aunt told me once when she spoke about
the piety of old fashioned religion: “Your problem
nephew, is you know too much.”

“It is by faith that we know,” she said “not by deeds;
remember God thinks for us. He knows all questions
without tense and answers them without limit."

"Don’t gaze too long at the sky. It will blind you. Don’t
sail off the edge of the earth, you will be devoured
by demons as you burn for your hubris and vanity."

Do not pleasure yourself or hair will grow from your mother’s chin.
Watch how easy it is to map love without falling asleep on the bed,
your sex in your fingers, and your woman or man alive invisible
like a Brandenburg concerto or Gillespie's "Africana."

We are all accountable for each other, so it is good if we spy, sneak
assured everyone is pure of heart. Remember, death’s celebration.
God knows every soul; He counts every grain of sand.
easy does it; our universe is much larger than the field
of one man, woman, couple, threesome, orgy.






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Paul Isthmus at 00:44 on 18 March 2006  Report this post
Sean,

Once more your poetry is like a feast upon itself whilst desribing its own taste, and is also kalaidoscopic and brilliant. To resavour the flavour (I'm getting initial beignets with rubber and dry grass) would take too long and I must go to bed. But I will put it in the pantry and return later to make myself a cold cut sandwich of criticism.

Thanks Sean,

Paul I

DJC at 07:03 on 18 March 2006  Report this post
Sean - as mentioned in flash poetry, it's good to have you back. It seems like a long time since you were last in amongst us. And I think think this poem works well - it's more coherent than some of the others I've looked at, has more of a sense of narrative.

It is by faith that we know,” she said “not by deeds;
remember God thinks for us. He knows all questions
without tense and answers them without limit.


I think this stanza is very strong. You get a real sense of the woman's voice, and can understand her character through her words. Very effective indeed.

Do not pleasure yourself or hair will grow from your mother’s chin.
Watch how easy it is to map love without falling asleep on the bed,
your sex in your fingers,[i/]

Again, a real sense of being spoken to, warned, made to feel guilty and dirty.

Ignorance is busting out all over the meadow and the spring.

Not sure about 'busting' here - disrupts the flow for me.

and your woman or man alive invisible
where the sparrows break down the edges of the cliff after storm.


This is a rather dense image, and I'm not sure how the sparrows link to the previous.

easy does it; our universe is much larger than the field
of one man, woman, couple, threesome, orgy.


Great ending, and so true.

Welcome back!!

Darren




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Oops - didn't close the italics.


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Are they closed now?

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Yes - sorry!

paul53 [for I am he] at 08:37 on 18 March 2006  Report this post
Welcome back, Sean.
This struck me as a "Beat" poem by a modern Odysseus, which could be laid out just as easily as fine prose. A fresh chapter in your life's journey. Title for the book:
you will be devoured
by demons as you burn for your hubris and vanity
Hubris and Vanity?
Reading this was like walking briefly with a sober Kerouac.

seanfarragher at 16:00 on 18 March 2006  Report this post
Darren, point well taken about one line. "sparrows break ..."
I cut it and replaced it Look above.

thanks

DJC at 16:09 on 18 March 2006  Report this post
Sean - nice. I really like the way you bring in classical and popular culture. Yep, this words better. Still don't like 'busting', though. How about:

Ignorance is bursting through meadow and spring.

Perhaps it is having too many monosyllabic words in the middle of the line which slows it down. Not sure.

D.

seanfarragher at 18:32 on 18 March 2006  Report this post
It's an old song ... i will put it in quotation marks. Maybe that is what it needs. Thanks for your review and starting up the new group.

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You're right. I had busting. it really is bursting. Makes a big difference.

thanks again
I had misremembered the song

DJC at 21:30 on 18 March 2006  Report this post
Come on then, let's see what you're made of. A flash poem by midnight tonight. You know you want to...

D.

seanfarragher at 23:47 on 18 March 2006  Report this post
I can post after Midnight I suppose. You want a midnight poem full of black and ebony images. Let me look at the exercise.

DJC at 09:16 on 19 March 2006  Report this post
Still hasn't been judged yet, so go for it!


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