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April haiku

by joanie 

Posted: 27 April 2006
Word Count: 13
Summary: ...and it's almost May!

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Now Nature coaxes
green offspring into the light;
a late Spring this year

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Account Closed at 10:00 on 28 April 2006  Report this post
Very true, Joanie! - I love the simplicity in this and also the very strong last line. Great!



joanie at 12:46 on 28 April 2006  Report this post
Thanks, Anne!


Beanie Baby at 20:00 on 01 May 2006  Report this post
Very effective; captures the mood brilliantly.

joanie at 20:09 on 01 May 2006  Report this post
Thanks, Beanie! I appreciate your response.


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