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Hypocrites

by hailfabio 

Posted: 04 July 2006
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When I'm done slagging you off
behind your back to people I don't really know, I'll
tell you what I think of you.

Probably via e-mail, if I bother.






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Beanie Baby at 12:43 on 05 July 2006  Report this post
Whew! Who has upset you? What a fantastic explosion of anger, bitterness, disappointment and sarcasm - brilliantly expressed in less than 30 words! I am mightily impressed. Because I love poetry like this - that I feel comes from somewhere deep down in our subconcious - I always feel very excited when one comes along and catches my eye like this one did. I can't criticise anything - which I know ain't a lot of help - but I just love it as it is.
Beanie.
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joanie at 17:05 on 05 July 2006  Report this post
Hi Stephen, as I read this thought that it wasn't the writer who was about to do the slagging off but that he/she was getting angry about people who do! In fact that he/she was the victim of it. Am I right?

I like it; it's very real for today. So much of this goes on unfortunately.

joanie
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hailfabio at 12:03 on 06 July 2006  Report this post
I think you both have the right idea, I'm taking the mikey here. Its not about the writer.

So many 2 faced people, only so many faces to go round.

Thanks
Stephen
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Account Closed at 11:56 on 07 July 2006  Report this post
Love it. Very dry and cynical. Great stuff!

A
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