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What should we write about?

by James Graham 

Posted: 17 July 2006
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Returning to his old home

The empty house
With no-one there
Is harder even
Than when I journeyed,
Grass for my pillow.

With my wife,
Together we made it -
Our garden with its streams.
Now the trees grow tall and rank.

My wife planted
This plum tree.
When I look on it
My heart chokes,
And the tears well up.

Ōmoto Tabito (665-731)



What should we write about?

1

What should we write about? Should we set
our poems in living rooms? Make elegies
for failed or failing partnerships?

We drift apart like the continents.
Are our little failures and farewells
as broad as the the whole world?

Tabito's was a private
moment, but he let us read
his diary for that day.

His solitary grief
migrates around the earth,
across the centuries;

it comes to rest
on a chair-back in Starbucks,
and folds its wings.

He knew that tears and trees
outlive the Emperor Shômu
and all the powers to come.

What did he know
of countries to the west?
Had he learned

from the Chinese
about the Syrian earthquake, or the latest
European horse-ploughs?

Would he have made
poems about these?
Perhaps, but what he did

was good enough. His grief
comes to land nearby,
and evokes our tears.

2

Should we live only in the histories
of our living-rooms and gardens?
We live at a time when the world

is near at hand; we know the places
where cities are rank and the poor
die young. We know

about the little witches of Kinshasa,
children who have tantrums or who cry
all night, or are too quiet, and are named

the devil's children, conjurers of disease
and hunger, poisoners of water.
We know they are put to death

for the unmagical crimes of others.
We know the history, or can find it
in Wikipedia: of the Congo as Leopold's

Domaine privé, his tropical
Tom Tiddler's ground where his overseers
farmed rubber, ivory, and severed hands;

where men of the Force publique
hanged children, raped women and beheaded men,
and Leopold banked twenty million,

two gold francs for every corpse. We know
how forty years ago the new Republic's
hands were severed: Patrice Lumumba

murdered, and a Western servant-tyrant
established instead of hope. If thieving
were an art (perhaps it is) Mobutu Sese Seko

would be its Mozart. While roadways crumbled,
and hospitals ran out of drugs, and schools
of tarp to patch the roof, his personal courier

flew daily back and forth to Zurich. He's dead
of cancer now, but there are wars and wars,
and little soldiers eight years old defend

the warlords and their gold and coltan mines,
and the dispossessed migrate and settle
in the shanty suburbs of Kinshasa,

where the Pentecostals pray all night, and speak
in tongues, and sell the sort of consolation
that religion sells, and lay

the cruelties of the world on little children.
Can we write about these things? Can I,
here in this quiet semi with security lights

and a garden full of roses and astilbes,
and a keyboard in a corner - can I know
the shanty suburbs of Kinshasa?

3

It is possible. I will not forget
I am a stranger there, but it is possible.
We are different, but the same.

We are the same and different.
What is the same, we know already.
What's different, we can learn.

The world is near at hand.
Imagination, curiosity and love
will fly us to Kinshasa. It is possible.







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Elsie at 20:02 on 17 July 2006  Report this post
Hi James, very thought-provoking. There was just one stanza that sounded slightly prose-like, more matter-of-fact than the rest:

flew daily back and forth to Zurich. He's dead
of cancer now, but there are wars and wars,
and little soldiers eight years old defend


I think it is fascinating how poetry can be laid down as history, therefore telling it as it is, mentioning places, creating a solid world is important. Though I have found a couple of people on the Internet (not WW) saying they don't want to know the name of a place, as it means nothing to them. Which seems a little blinkered to me - "I don't know, therefore I don't want to know."

I have to admit I knew little about Kinshasa - but after reading your piece, and looking on the net, I know a lot more now. Thank you.

NinaLara at 20:55 on 17 July 2006  Report this post
I like the sense of expansion and contraction in this poem - that however much of the world we inhabit there is always the coming back to our similarities as humans ... that what is true for a man in 700 is still true for us today. I think the poem hints at all the terrors of humanity while remaining grounded in the opening quotation - the expression of an enduring love.

I like the contrast of parts 1 and 2 - the slow easy reflection of 1 versus the intense pace of 2:

I love the simplicity of this:

His solitary grief
migrates around the earth,
across the centuries;

it comes to rest
on a chair-back in Starbucks,
and folds its wings.


and the return to this at the endof your journey round history and the world:

the cruelties of the world on little children.
Can we write about these things? Can I,
here in this quiet semi with security lights

and a garden full of roses and astilbes,
and a keyboard in a corner - can I know
the shanty suburbs of Kinshasa?


I just wonder if these last two verses need a slowing down of pace? A bit like coming in to land and preparing for the final section.

I had to play with the last section for it to become meaningful for me ... and the change in the meaning of the first verse intrigued me, so I thought I'd pass it on to you to see what you thought:

It is possible I will not forget
I am a stranger there.

We are different, but the same.
We are the same and different.

What is the same, we know already.
What's different, we can learn.

The world is near at hand.
Imagination, curiosity and love

will fly us to Kinshasa.
It is possible.


joanie at 22:01 on 19 July 2006  Report this post
Hello James. I love the format of this and the way it made me (the reader!) stop, re-read often and think!

I have said recently that, in total contrast to those people to whom Elsie refers, I have begun to love reference to specific places! Perhaps it's the wonderful convenience of the internet as opposed to getting one's coat on and catching the bus to the refernce library!

I have enjoyed this but I have to say that there is still so much more to investigate yet. I need more time. I have a ferry crossing to endure tomorrow so I think I shall print this off and ponder it slowly.

I do like repetition; the opening and closing phrases repeated are very satisfying in number 3. I like the questions too!

Lots more to say and so much more to contemplate - perhaps I'll be back!

joanie

James Graham at 20:11 on 22 July 2006  Report this post
This sounds very interesting, and I'll watch out for your article next week.

James.

Tina at 17:10 on 24 July 2006  Report this post
James

The title of this poem, for me, is as much as statement as a question. What should we write about indeed?? You mention Mozart in this piece -- his apporach to writing music was ....he said

I look for the notes that love each other

this is it for me - finding 'notes' / words/ lines that fit together and writing about those things that inspire me whether greatly or because of some small detail in the moment - with this premise does it matter what the subject matter is? For me the answer is no. We should write about those things that inspire us. Give a voice to those things that words do not convey in any obvious sense.

I am an enormous fan of Sharon Olds and heard her read once in the USA. Her work is intensely personal and almost lifts the lid of her intimate life. She reads with great passion.

Your poem is also very pasionate. It takes the reader on a fast track journey and asks blunt questions.

Should we live only in the histories
of our living-rooms and gardens?


To write in a way that reaches others there is the necessity for the subject and writer to be in a relationship but this does not always require the actual physical experience - not for me anyway- the willingness to get to know and to begin to unwrap its understanding is enough.

Imagination, curiosity and love
will fly us to Kinshasa.


A great poem James which demands further reading
with thanks
Tina




NinaLara at 23:35 on 24 July 2006  Report this post
Hi Tina and James,

I'm so glad you mentioned Sharon Olds, Tina - I am a fan too. She is such a good example of the power of writing about the personal. Her work is so strong and clear that it alway seems (to me anyway) to go beyond personal experience and to say things on a grand political scale. I guess it is that old feminist principle of the personal being political.

James Graham at 19:07 on 26 July 2006  Report this post
Tina, thanks for your thoughtful comment. Of course it's true, the subject doesn't matter, only the vitality of the language and the poet's ability to find the words that love each other. Poetry really can be about anything.

Nina, it's also true of course that the personal can be political. Even if it isn't, even if a poem about the break-up of the poet's relationship, or death of a parent, or his/her little daughter crying because of something that happened at school - even if that sort of poem isn't especially 'political' (even in the broadest sense) it can still touch many readers. It's just as important as explicitly political writing, e.g. war poetry or poetry about world poverty and injustice.

I can't help wishing, though, that more poets could follow Eleanor Wilner's path and try to 'write about what they don't know'. You say it in your comment - for a poem to succeed, there has to be a relationship between writer and subject, but it doesn't have to be a relationship involving direct, first hand experience. As you say, there can be a 'willingness to get to know'. And even if our knowledge of life in Kinshasa or Lebanon is second hand, we can still write an authentic poem about it.

All the material on the Congo that I included in the poem comes from books - including Planet of Slums by Mike Davies, which analyses the flight from the countryside to the cities which is happening on such a huge scale everywhere in the 'Third World'. As far as I know, Davies's knowledge of the Congo is second hand too. But that needn't get in the way of writing a cogent prose survey - or an authentic poem.

A P.S. on Sharon Olds. A poem of hers that I came across recently, and like very much, is 'Mrs Krikorian'. You probably know it. The poet begins on the day she 'arrived in 6th grade,/ a known criminal' and says of her teacher Mrs Krikorian, 'She saved me' - by giving her a pass to get into the library after school. But talking about the personal and the political, I think this poem moves completely naturally from one to the other. Especially where she writes:

And who had saved Mrs. Krikorian?
When the Turks came across Armenia, who
slid her into the belly of a quilt, who
locked her in a chest, who mailed her to America?
And that one, who saved her, and that one—
who saved her, to save the one
who saved Mrs. Krikorian, who was
standing there on the sill of 6th grade...


The whole text of the poem is on the Poetry Foundation site (address in a previous comment, above).

James.

James Graham at 10:07 on 04 August 2006  Report this post
Nina, I read your illuminating article on 'A Salvo for Africa' at 'Intercapillary Space'. I knew next to nothing about Douglas Oliver but now I'll get hold of 'A Salvo for Africa' and maybe other collections of his. He seems to be able to bring political issues up-front into his poetry, but also explore the complexities of the European relationship with Africa. He doesn't seem to be anthologised - at least, not in the anthologies I have. Unfashionable, I suppose - which attracts me even more to his work.

James.

For any other WW members interested - the link to 'Intercapillary Space' is in Nina's comment above. It's an excellent review - it introduces us to a writer we may not have paid much attention to, and it raises key issues.


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