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Haiku at the Co-op in the Square

by joanie 

Posted: 19 July 2006
Word Count: 8
Summary: A gob-smacking response to "Hiya Miss!"
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This naughty schoolboy
transformed into Adonis;
naked-chested male.






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Beanie Baby at 07:04 on 20 July 2006  Report this post
Wow - this tells a story! It's nice that it is from the female viewpoint. Clever how you haven't made it sound indecent! Nicely written and evocative.
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Account Closed at 10:05 on 21 July 2006  Report this post
Like it, Joanie - naughty but nice! And so true these last few days - young men are stripping off everywhere. It's like heaven!

:))

A
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joanie at 11:44 on 21 July 2006  Report this post
Beanie and Holly, many thanks. He would be amazed if he knew that he had inspired me to write poetry!

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