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Serendipitous shortcomings

by DomSanchez 

Posted: 05 May 2007
Word Count: 418


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He shifted one foot in front of the next, exploring the carpeted floor immediately next to him. He wished to hell he could remember where he put that wretched screwdriver, it was the only thing he could think of that would be long enough, so he could sure it would kill him. Kill Mike.
Frank scrabbled his hand about on the work surfaces scattering everything in its wake. Damn his wretched eyes, he still had not even been given his white stick, he had only been let out of the hospital that morning, and really only because they were out of beds.
It was Mike's fault.
He had made him like this and all because he hadn't tightened that damned rivet, with the bloody screwdriver, and now he was for it. If only he could find it!
Mike was in the garden humming to himself tinkering with some other stupid contraption. Frank had to make his move now, he could not stand that bloody humming, doesn't he know what he'd done?
If he couldn't find that screwdriver he was going to damn well do it with his bare hands.
He shuffled outside feeling for the door frame, he could hear a plane passing overhead, it sounded as if it was having a bit of trouble, as if the engines were struggling.
Mike was just ahead of him now, still bloody humming his stupid tunes. Even if he didn't have a screwdriver he was going to throttle him.
At the same moment he thought these thoughts the plane above listed to one side, the contents of the hold sliding towards the open cargo doors, but only the old tools had fallen to the relief of the crew.
As Frank got near to the humming, he thought he could also hear a whistling sound that was increasing in volume.
Finally, the whistle peaked in a cacophony of sound, then, as suddenly as it began, it stopped, finishing with a thud.
The humming stopped.
Frank felt his way to where the humming had been, the body was slumped on the ground, he felt along the prone arms, up to the shoulders, which were wet and slightly sticky, his fingers followed the line of the neck up to the skull, more wetness. Finally, his fingers reached to the top of the head, which was now soft to the touch, and sticking out at a right angle to the temple he felt the round handle of what he would swear was a screwdriver.






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Dreamer at 01:30 on 06 May 2007  Report this post
Hi Dom,

Welcome to the group.

I'm impressed. That's the second one that instead of choosing either prompt, used both.

This struck a chord as just the other day I was talking to a client who lives under the route that planes take while approaching the airport. She was out in her garden when she heard a strange noise comming from an overhead plane and then was splashed with a kerosene like substance. It turns out that planes cannot land with too much fuel in their tanks. Usually they take a detour out over the lake to dump it, many, in the interest of saving time, have taken to dumping it over the countryside.

So, I did not find this entirely unlikely.

Spotted on little typo.
so he could (be)sure it would kill him.

Nice story, well told.

Brian.

Prospero at 06:24 on 06 May 2007  Report this post
Hi Dom

Very ingenious. Things dropping out of the sky are not that rare though it is very unlucky to be struck by one. However, if he was humming Mike probably deserved it.

Thanks for an enjoyable read.

One tiny pick, you don't tighten rivets with a screwdriver. Though if you tried it could account for the rivet coming loose.

Best

John

Account Closed at 08:00 on 06 May 2007  Report this post
Nice tale of fateful revenge - left me smiling!

A
xxx

DomSanchez at 18:15 on 07 May 2007  Report this post
Thanks all for your comments its something that just came to me in the morning.


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