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Marshall matters

by shaunsouthern 

Posted: 28 September 2003
Word Count: 60
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I'm shady and slim
I'm really quite dim
I'm rap with a silent C

I talk about guns
And blonde girls bums
I make money from hypocrisy

I've never had a lady
Like what I am
Why I just don't really know

I'm feeling quite pissed
From the drugs that I've missed
Cause my Mother had all of my blow








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Anna Reynolds at 17:14 on 16 October 2003  Report this post
Shaunsouthern, I can see why you couldn't summarise this. It's very funny, neat and concise, and I like the way the tone changes abruptly from light to mining the darker stuff at the end. Great last line by the way. You're got 'gir' which I assume should be 'girl' and this makes two girls in a short space of time- maybe a different choice of word? Lovely.
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