Login   Sign Up 



 
Archive » hailfabio » Work
Archive »  Poetry » General » Work

Moment

by hailfabio 

Posted: 04 June 2007
Word Count: 17
Font Size
 


Printable Version
Print Double spaced


Trying to describe it,
I’d rather prescribe it.

Her hand in mine,
there’s no need for time.






Favourite this work Favourite This Author


Comments by other Members



joanie at 16:56 on 04 June 2007  Report this post
Hi Stephen. That's lovely! Why waste time trying to say what it's like when you can simply say 'Go on, try it!'

The last line is very profound, I think! It has made me ponder already about what 'time' is!

Holding hands is excellent, isn't it??

joanie
Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

Beanie Baby at 21:22 on 06 June 2007  Report this post
Beautiful - full of tenderness and love. Bewitching piece.
Beanie
Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)

hailfabio at 12:23 on 07 June 2007  Report this post
Holding hands is the best, it says so much and is calming.

Thanks for commenting,

Stephen
Helpful (0) Made Me Think (0) Made Me Smile (0) Pure Genius (0)


To post comments you need to become a member. If you are already a member, please log in .

 






Other work by hailfabio:      ...view all work by hailfabio