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I stand firm.

by Bobo 

Posted: 01 October 2003
Word Count: 38


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Your small-minded reality,
lack of vision,
renders you weak
yet sanctimonious,
watching and judging the 'others'
to reaffirm your 'self'.

You are fluff on the wind,
carried, controlled,
swept away
and along
in the grey.

I stand firm.







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Fearless at 11:19 on 01 October 2003  Report this post
Very well said.

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The Walrus at 11:23 on 01 October 2003  Report this post
'Fluff on the wind' - echoing his 'small-minded reality', lovely. However, for me the last three words are the best... firm yes, but fluid to?

The Walrus
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Bobo at 11:24 on 01 October 2003  Report this post
Fankoo m'dear...a little bubble of anger I needed to burst!

BoBo
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And yes Walrus...firm but fluid, I hope!

The Walrus at 11:29 on 01 October 2003  Report this post
I am delighted to hear that.

Write on babe!

The Walrus
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