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Heartbreak

by Bobo 

Posted: 01 October 2003
Word Count: 49


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To love too many,
too much,
too hard,
strips the soul bare,
leaving rawness,
so sore.

To give so much,
too freely,
too fast,
peels the spirit
to its innermost core.

These are wounds
too deep to mend
quickly.
Oh-so slowly
they heal,
to be torn apart
once more.






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Rai15 at 18:45 on 02 October 2003  Report this post
I really am lost for words... it's brilliant, you have described everything that i am feeling right now. It's just... beautiful.

~Rai~

Bobo at 22:33 on 02 October 2003  Report this post
Rai - thanks so much for your kind feedback - it's so good to know that others share the same feelings, go through the same things.

Hug,

BoBo
x

peterxbrown at 17:05 on 28 October 2003  Report this post
Insightful, loving Bobo. This is great! The wounds mend until the next time don't they.
love
peterb xx


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