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The Convent

by Maria 

Posted: 06 October 2003
Word Count: 400
Summary: This is an article about my former school.


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The Convent


I entered into the building which was formerly known in Dingle town as The Convent. As I walked down the long corridor I noticed the wooden panels and high ceilings. A statue of King David carved in white marble lay beside a window. There was a peculiar smell about the place.

I stepped into the hall to view the exhibition of Faith and Light which had been advertised on shop windows about the town for the past month. The lights were on. There was a donation box standing next to the door and the fire extinguisher next to that. The wall hangings were nailed onto panels and there was a poem next to each work of art. The intricate weaving patterns caught my eye as did the Chakra Rainbow of silken pictures which were at the other end of the hall. Orange, wine, green, blue, yellow. There were three aqua-marine candles floating in a bowl of water - I would have liked to have lit them but felt that it wasn't my duty though it would have added to the atmosphere of the exhibition.

At first glance there seemed to be a lack of creativity by the artists. The woven materials were either too short on one side or too tight or not finished off properly. But on examination I realised that these pieces of art were very precious. Why? Because the artists were actually disabled and the Faith and Light project is all about craft therapy for a community with a learning disability. Fitting for the community that had lived in the convent previously who had given their lives to education.

I spent some time perusing, reading about the artists and admiring the skills of Paul who suffers from spina-bifida and Leanne who is partially blind and still quite young.

As I turned to go, I noticed a rather large poster on a door at one corner of the room saying "Dangerous - No Entry Under Any Circumstances". Because I am nosy by nature I peeked inside and there before me was a whiter-than-white toilet, with a beautiful mirror over the ornamented sink. There was also a virgin-white bath in pristine condition, pink toilet paper and make-up, eyeliner and lipstick on the ledge by the mirror. And there was that smell again. That's when I noticed the bottle of Dettol which was on the window sill. [399]






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Richard Brown at 13:11 on 16 October 2003  Report this post
A dangerous bathroom? Intriguing! Making connections, I wondered about nuns and secret cosmetic sessions. I very much enjoyed reading this piece but wondered, if it is intended as journalism, about the potential market. I think I was influenced by the summary, which reveals that the exhbition space was your former school, and by the title, which suggests that the focus is on the convent. Is the piece primarily about the Dettol smell and some unstated associations with school/convent or is it about the double take on the exhibition? From a purely commercial viewpoint, I wonder if it would be worth making two pieces out of the one; a short, funny tale of old school, odours, nuns and the 'dangerous' facilities and a much more serious one about the exhibition. Apropos the latter - I guess there's lots of scope to write about expectations and about whether creative works should be judged according to the abilities of their creators.
Richard.

Maria at 04:22 on 19 October 2003  Report this post
Hi Richard,

Thanks for commenting on my work. I suppose its not really journalism but I didn't know what category it fell under. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.

I suppose subconciously I was thinking back to the different smells that I remembered from the convent. Dettol, Milton, baking...!! you name it!! The place was immaculate when it was run by the nuns.

I like your idea of writing about expectations etc. but I wouldn't know where to start at this moment. I'll have to give it some thought,

Thanks again,

Maria


old friend at 16:32 on 07 November 2003  Report this post
Hi Maria,
I think you would find it difficult to have this piece accepted by a Mag or Newspaper. However what struck me was the nice 'observations' and your words hint at your having a very good creative streak in your writing.

Richard is absolutely right. Take even the smallest mentions you have made... the artistic work by the disabled, the statue of King David in white marble, the floating candles... each of these could form the basis of a tale.

Kind regards,

Len



Maria at 22:34 on 09 November 2003  Report this post
Hi Len,

Thanks for the kind words. I do love writing fiction but I also enjoy writing articles etc. Your probably right about this piece - I can't see any mag. printing it- not even my local newspaper!! But I'll persevere!!

Maria



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