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It`s happening again
Posted: 08 October 2003
Word Count: 12
Summary: Just a little piece about falling in love..again.
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breathless
staring
trembling
caring
embrace
cuddles
tingles
muddles
tickle
gaze
fondle
phase?
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 Anna Reynolds at 14:00 on 10 October 2003
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Stacey, I like the way this runs very simply from the first flush- 'breathless'- to the terrible possibility of 'phase'. Lovely.
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 Ticonderoga at 23:24 on 10 October 2003
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Wondrous! Perfect progression. You'll find my own, very long-winded, version of this idea in 'Delusion'.
best,
Mike
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peterxbrown at 23:40 on 10 October 2003
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I love this poem, its succinct and wonderful. The sparse rhythm is brilliant and effective.
peter b
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 Stacey at 12:20 on 13 October 2003
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Wow, thank you so much for your comments guys. Anna, I am glad you picked up on the clear definition between the first and final words, your's was just the kind of reaction I hoped for! And Ticonderoga and Peter, many many thanks for your appreciation and praise.
Kind regards,
Stacey.
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