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Graceful Defiance

by The Walrus 

Posted: 10 October 2003
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I see a swelling sea of suffering,
encumbered by grief,
trying to tread the treacled waters
of deep dread.

I also see a lifeline
flung far and wide,
sweeping its broad powerful line
to every last one -
however far submerged -
no matter -
all, it will gather.

I see the brazen brandishing of a sword,
defiantly swathing the manacles of
mistaken destiny.

I see choice,
the hoarse voice relinquishing
of pain’s body.

I see the gentle face
turning decisively towards the sun.

I see the graceful, sainted step
of surety.






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Fearless at 10:19 on 10 October 2003  Report this post
Simply stunning - it struck a chord with me.

Fearless

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Everything is gonna be alright, the sun continues to shine and we're not alone. I particularly liked the imagery of the lifeline and the sword.

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The Walrus at 10:23 on 10 October 2003  Report this post
You are too kind Fearless.

The Walrus, wallowing in waters of defiant optimism.

Bobo at 10:42 on 10 October 2003  Report this post
Walrus - so beautiful...gives hope even to a miserable bitch such as myself...thank you.

BoBo
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The Walrus at 10:58 on 10 October 2003  Report this post
I'm glad you liked it. Although, would beg to differ on the 'miserable bitch' label.

The Walrus
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