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Quizzicism (3)

by Zettel

Posted: 15 December 2007
Word Count: 41
Summary: Haven't done one of these for long time - so to lighten the mood a bit after my last post.

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Quizzicism (3)

she thought
he thought
about her
the way
she thought
he thought
about her
but
he didn’t

he thought
she thought
about him
the way
he wanted her
to think
about him
but
she didn’t

tragedy
in the making

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Ticonderoga at 14:49 on 15 December 2007 Report this post

Enjoyed this........I think you could take it even further into the ridiculous tangles of amatory mis/perception.
Fun!

Best,

Mike

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DeepBlueGypsy at 23:48 on 15 December 2007 Report this post

"I think" it's laugh out loud funny! Fabulous! Thanks for the mood lifter! Love the title too! I See this is number three so I'm going to look for the first two in your other posted pieces of work! Best, Divi

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DeepBlueGypsy at 23:50 on 15 December 2007 Report this post

Zettel-"I think" it's laugh out loud funny! Fabulous! Thanks for the mood lifter! Love the title too! I See this is number three so I'm going to look for the first two in your other posted pieces of work! Best, Divi

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V`yonne at 01:03 on 16 December 2007 Report this post