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Quizzicism (3)

by Zettel 

Posted: 15 December 2007
Word Count: 41
Summary: Haven't done one of these for long time - so to lighten the mood a bit after my last post.


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Quizzicism (3)


she thought
he thought
about her
the way
she thought
he thought
about her
but
he didnít

he thought
she thought
about him
the way
he wanted her
to think
about him
but
she didnít

tragedy
in the making






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Ticonderoga at 14:49 on 15 December 2007  Report this post
Enjoyed this........I think you could take it even further into the ridiculous tangles of amatory mis/perception.
Fun!

Best,

Mike

DeepBlueGypsy at 23:48 on 15 December 2007  Report this post
"I think" it's laugh out loud funny! Fabulous! Thanks for the mood lifter! Love the title too! I See this is number three so I'm going to look for the first two in your other posted pieces of work! Best, Divi

DeepBlueGypsy at 23:50 on 15 December 2007  Report this post
Zettel-"I think" it's laugh out loud funny! Fabulous! Thanks for the mood lifter! Love the title too! I See this is number three so I'm going to look for the first two in your other posted pieces of work! Best, Divi

V`yonne at 01:03 on 16 December 2007  Report this post
Over before it starts :) Very good.

joanie at 18:32 on 16 December 2007  Report this post
Tragedy indeed! But very funny and achingly poignant.

joanie

Zettel at 00:17 on 17 December 2007  Report this post
Thanks everyone glad you enjoyed it.

Z

J1mbo at 20:33 on 17 December 2007  Report this post
Very clever, and very clear. Leaves everything open and yet creates a vivid dynamic between the two characters.

Zettel at 21:06 on 18 December 2007  Report this post
Thanks Jimbo - glad you liked it

Z


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