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Silver button - Flash challenge

by joanie 

Posted: 03 May 2008
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Slowly
I reach across
before you irritate.

So many
times you rouse
me from dreams as

deliciously
I snuggle down
and wait for that

glorious
moment when
the day becomes mine.







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V`yonne at 19:53 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Beautifully stuctured, elegant and concise.
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joanie at 20:05 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Goodness, Oonah! That was quick. Thank you!

joanie
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V`yonne at 20:07 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
You're welcome. Gorgeous poem
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Nella at 21:38 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Very beautiful, Joanie! I love this:
glorious
moment when
the day becomes mine

Robin

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It gives off such a nice feeling...
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joanie at 22:21 on 04 May 2008  Report this post
Thank you, Robin. I appreciate your response.

joanie
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