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by joanie 

Posted: 01 July 2008
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Swelling into green
boldness flies the certainty
of a July day






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V`yonne at 09:23 on 02 July 2008  Report this post
Like birds flying the nest. Love that:
certainty
of a July day

that is so right!
Read the WriteWords interview with Oonah Joslin (V`yonne)
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joanie at 15:03 on 02 July 2008  Report this post
Thanks, Oonah!

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Beanie Baby at 17:00 on 13 July 2008  Report this post
Oh wow! You have done it again, Joanie. This is absolutely perfect and spot on. My mind was awash with powerful images of sunshine, waterfalls, even seaweed. So beautiful. So powerful. Love it!!!!
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joanie at 22:57 on 13 July 2008  Report this post
Thanks, Beanie! Glad you liked it.

joanie
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Katerina at 08:22 on 14 July 2008  Report this post
Beanie' s right, this does conjure up different images. For me, the ' swelling into green boldness' , reminded me of a huge flower bud about to burst open, and I loved the ' certainty of a July day' .

Kat x
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joanie at 08:48 on 14 July 2008  Report this post
Thanks, Kat!

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