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by  joanie  ( 19718 )

Posted: 01 July 2008
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Swelling into green
boldness flies the certainty
of a July day




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Posted by :  V`yonne at 09:23 on 02 July 2008
Like birds flying the nest. Love that:
certainty
of a July day

that is so right!
Posted by :  joanie at 15:03 on 02 July 2008
Thanks, Oonah!

joanie
Posted by :  Beanie Baby at 17:00 on 13 July 2008
Oh wow! You have done it again, Joanie. This is absolutely perfect and spot on. My mind was awash with powerful images of sunshine, waterfalls, even seaweed. So beautiful. So powerful. Love it!!!!
Beanie
Posted by :  joanie at 22:57 on 13 July 2008
Thanks, Beanie! Glad you liked it.

joanie
Posted by :  Katerina at 08:22 on 14 July 2008
Beanie' s right, this does conjure up different images. For me, the ' swelling into green boldness' , reminded me of a huge flower bud about to burst open, and I loved the ' certainty of a July day' .

Kat x
Posted by :  joanie at 08:48 on 14 July 2008
Thanks, Kat!

joanie


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