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The vicar`s dead

by jasper 

Posted: 04 July 2008
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The vicar's dead, he's gone to hell. Straight downstairs;I,m glad as well.He should have taken'Uncle' Trevor,to live in purgatory,forever. Grandad,too,deserves to go,but,please don't let my mummy know.






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NMott at 11:40 on 04 July 2008  Report this post
Good one Jasper, very funny.


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Bunbry at 17:28 on 04 July 2008  Report this post
I found the last 5 words chilling not funny. Top notch stuff.
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joanie at 17:33 on 04 July 2008  Report this post
Excellent - funny yet chilling, as has been said!

joanie
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sarah3891 at 15:03 on 07 July 2008  Report this post
Great stuff - completely echo the comments above!

Only thing, I stumbled over ' purgatory' - it scans (or doesn' t) depending on how you say it I guess?

Really like though!!

Sarah
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