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Flying to the Milky Way

by joanie 

Posted: 20 July 2008
Word Count: 43
Summary: For the Challenge in 'Flash'


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You draw me into
your ball of light
through diamond
clusters

Your outstretched
arms entice me
from my earth-bound
state

Helpless I fall
upwards, spiralling
under Your hanging
wings

Marvelling, You
watch my spinning flight
and wonder how a mere mortal
can fly







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Nella at 16:51 on 20 July 2008  Report this post
I loved this, Joanie. It';s really very beautiful.

Helpless I fall
upwards, spiralling
under Your hanging
wings
Wonderful!

Robin


joanie at 16:59 on 20 July 2008  Report this post
Gosh, Robin - that was quick! Thank you!

joanie

Nella at 17:27 on 20 July 2008  Report this post
Were we on-line at the same time?!

joanie at 17:32 on 20 July 2008  Report this post
Must have been!

V`yonne at 21:46 on 20 July 2008  Report this post
very nice joanie.lovely form.well expressed
LOVED
upwards, spiralling
under Your hanging
wings

Marvelling,

OONAH AND SISTERS!

joanie at 21:59 on 20 July 2008  Report this post
Thanks, Oonah. The photos are just fantastic. I chose my birthday, because I didn';t know where to start! Excellent challenge!

joanie

Inspiration at 15:40 on 04 August 2008  Report this post
Oh this is a lovely poem, I really enjoyed it. It really comes across as if you have a real sense of wonder! Not suprising by that lovely photo you used to inspire you.


Well done,

XXXInniXXX

joanie at 02:27 on 09 August 2008  Report this post
Thanks Inni!


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