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Flying to the Milky Way

Posted: 20 July 2008
Word Count: 43
Summary: For the Challenge in 'Flash'

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You draw me into
your ball of light
through diamond
clusters

Your outstretched
arms entice me
from my earth-bound
state

Helpless I fall
upwards, spiralling
under Your hanging
wings

Marvelling, You
watch my spinning flight
and wonder how a mere mortal
can fly

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Posted by : joanie at 16:43 on 20 July 2008

This is written in response to this photo:-

http://antwrp.gsfc.nasa.gov/apod/ap950908.html

joanie

Posted by : Nella at 16:51 on 20 July 2008

I loved this, Joanie. It';s really very beautiful.

Helpless I fall
upwards, spiralling
under Your hanging
wings
Wonderful!

Robin

Posted by : joanie at 16:59 on 20 July 2008

Gosh, Robin - that was quick! Thank you!

joanie

Posted by : Nella at 17:27 on 20 July 2008

Were we on-line at the same time?!

Posted by : joanie at 17:32 on 20 July 2008

Must have been!

Posted by : V`yonne at 21:46 on 20 July 2008

very nice joanie.lovely form.well expressed
LOVED

upwards, spiralling
under Your hanging
wings

Marvelling,

OONAH AND SISTERS!

Posted by : joanie at 21:59 on 20 July 2008

Thanks, Oonah. The photos are just fantastic. I chose my birthday, because I didn';t know where to start! Excellent challenge!

joanie

Posted by : Inspiration at 15:40 on 04 August 2008

Oh this is a lovely poem, I really enjoyed it. It really comes across as if you have a real sense of wonder! Not suprising by that lovely photo you used to inspire you.

Well done,

XXXInniXXX

Posted by : joanie at 02:27 on 09 August 2008

Thanks Inni!

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