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Pity Eyes

by Bobo 

Posted: 27 October 2003
Word Count: 45
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Tragic
though I may be,
take your pity eyes elsewhere,
to someone else's lifescape,
someone else's true despair.
oh yes,
I can mend
my own heart,
sticky plasters at my side.
It is they that need you,
crave you,
give to them
your pity eyes.







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Fearless at 10:46 on 27 October 2003  Report this post
BoBo

If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, so then is tragedy and pity, non?

Fearless
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spud at 11:12 on 27 October 2003  Report this post
Bobo

GO girl!! (rah, rah or whatever the gesture is?)Yep - self-reliance and healing. Pity for me just leads to more 'tiny tears'.

Superb piece AGAIN!

cheers

Spud
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roger at 11:59 on 27 October 2003  Report this post
Oh bobo, I thought this was the sadest thing I've read for ages...it sounds like you're protesting too much and in great need of a cuddle. Beautifully written but sooooo sad.
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roovacrag at 12:36 on 27 October 2003  Report this post
bobo its beatifulxx
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Bobo at 17:02 on 27 October 2003  Report this post
Thanks so much. Your comments have brought tears to my eyes.

Big hugs,

B x
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poemsgalore at 18:28 on 27 October 2003  Report this post
What more can I say - I like your attitude pal. Defiant to the end. Love it Bobo
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