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senryu

by oskar ( 448 )

Posted: 10 October 2008
Word Count: 37

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Senryu

October’s dawn
Sorrowful as a bedroom
Reeking of booze

Senryu

Dark hotel room
Lit up by blinking neon light
Paid sex and silence

Senryu

Echo of Terns’ shrieks
Empty row-boat in a fjord
Spooked is silence

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Posted by : V`yonne at 09:45 on 10 October 2008

I don't know the form that well to comment on it but I do like that second one very much.

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