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A sign
Posted: 28 October 2003
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A sign
is all I need.
Some gesture,
clarity.
Show me,
demonstrate
that you and I
are meant to be.
Can't do this
on my own,
can't feel for
both of us.
Please take charge
of your own heart
and show me
how you love.
Tears welling
in my heart,
and spilling
in my soul.
Have courage,
have faith,
stand up.
Allow me
to make you whole.
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 Bobo at 10:44 on 28 October 2003
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Yes. But sometimes it's not enough to be able to love - demonstrating it, with actions, is also needed.
B x
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Fearless at 10:46 on 28 October 2003
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True, but can he actually love? Thats a precursor to demonstrating it.
F
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Bobo at 10:55 on 28 October 2003
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Yes, he can, but it sometimes feels as though I'm the one who does all the demonstrating.
Make sense?
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Fearless at 11:01 on 28 October 2003
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Yes. But if he is unable to demonstrate it, then can you be sure its love that he has? Sorry, not an appropriate place to raise that.
F
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Bobo at 11:04 on 28 October 2003
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Hmmmmmmm...I believe it to be love, but then, who knows? Only he really knows and he says he loves me so I believe him...
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roovacrag at 11:19 on 28 October 2003
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Love doesn't always have to be demonstrated to know it's there. Just a look or a gesture is enough. xx
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peterxbrown at 16:59 on 28 October 2003
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Beautiful Bobo. Very tender and moving. The language is exactly right. The recipient is lucky.
Love peterbxx (jealous old git!)
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Bobo at 09:00 on 29 October 2003
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Thanks Peter - not so sure he's 'lucky' though!
BoBo x
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Lawrenco at 01:02 on 05 December 2003
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Hi BoBo, well! We have all been there like little children fumbling along but when guidance is us what then !That feeling of hopelesness is awful,how we all are unprepared and hope things can progress for you there all the best Lawrenco.
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