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Greenwich Mean Time

by  joanie  ( 19718 )

Posted: 08 November 2008
Word Count: 8
Summary: It's just SO dark! .... and worse to come!


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Four o'clock
and already the skies
are darkening




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Posted by :  Alan Summers at 18:37 on 27 November 2008
Hi Joanie,

I was quite surprised to find that I didn't have that many 'dark sky' haiku.

It's very remiss of me as a regular seasonal haiku blog is about to move into Winter shortly. ;-)

Here's four haiku mentioning 'dark' but how many are autumnal or winter though? ;-)



turning into the thermals
unknown birds
into white then dark again




fading last note
torresian crow sounds
the darkening sky




dark morning...
the sushi bar opens up
for the train station





partial eclipse
the sky darkens then lightens
my cappuccino




Alan
http://area17.blogspot.com

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