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Becoming Whole
Posted: 05 January 2009
Word Count: 53
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As I lie close, within your arms,
I ache to feel you closer still,
So close that every inch of me
Is pressed against you, pressed until
I am disolved, absorbed within
Your whole, and all that once was two
Will dissipate, will melt away,
'Till I am left, a part of you.
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Posted by :
 Bishti at 18:02 on 05 January 2009
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It must be love Epona
This poem has a nice rythm to it, short and sweet
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Posted by :
V`yonne at 18:19 on 05 January 2009
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That reads very smoothly - a nice Valentine poem.
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