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Tired Birds

by datkins 

Posted: 07 December 2002
Word Count: 7

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Tired seagulls
Fly eastwards now
Away from the sun.

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Richard Brown at 09:08 on 04 July 2003  Report this post
Just came across this whilst browsing the site. I'm no poet and know little about the rigours of haiku and the like but I found this to be surprisingly evocative. I thought of vivid sunsets over the sea and the weary flap of white wings. Thanks, datkins.

KatieMcCullough at 23:54 on 13 April 2009  Report this post
This popped up on the random read and I too am no poet but this is simply relaxing. It's a complete scene with no blanks or questions, I really like it.

I hope you're still writing!


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