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From the Butt and Oyster

by nickb 

Posted: 14 May 2010
Word Count: 177
Summary: It's a lovely little place on the Orwell.....great crab salad. Maybe this could prompt an exercise around the theme of water.....if anyone fancies it?


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Many suns streaked the estuary
as dusk came soft in the silver mud,
scudding past moored boats stilled on a calm ebb,
past Godwit, Plover and Redshank
skipping in the ooze,
past draggled seaweed
and dense woods coming in to leaf.

They fell on three Thames barges,
squat, flat bottomed,
hulled in the mire,
furled flax sails budding ochre,
rooted in the shadow of grey tides.
In their days of sand and brick
these sisters laced each sunset
in a warm spritsail,
slipped from river to river
with slow familiarity.

Looking from the Butt and Oyster
this small bay had the stillness
of long retirement.
Still tethered by grimy rope like a slave,
a wreck splayed its carcass in the silt
as the sisters looked on,
uneasy in the windless backwater.
They seemed to me to long for use
in a sharp Medway squall.

This low tide had no mourners at its funeral
but a coral sky and splintered sun.
A Godwit called in the dusk
and we turned from the window
with a desire to talk.






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Nella at 20:12 on 16 May 2010  Report this post
Lovely, very vivid, Nick.
This low tide had no mourners at its funeral
but a coral sky and splintered sun.
Love this image!
Robin

butterfly2000 at 15:34 on 30 June 2010  Report this post
Beautifully evocative, especially the final stanza... I was completely in that moment ;0)

FelixBenson at 15:57 on 30 June 2010  Report this post
This is lovely. Not sure how I missed it until now - and you suggested the theme of water too.
What beautiful imagery. Langourous tempo, and lovely sounds.

these sisters laced each sunset
in a warm spritsail,
slipped from river to river
with slow familiarity.



Lovely sibilant sounds - fitting so well with theme.

slave,
a wreck splayed its carcass in the silt
as the sisters looked on,
uneasy in the windless backwater.



This low tide had no mourners at its funeral
but a coral sky and splintered sun.


Lovely, and very accomplished.


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