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Pickled Onion

by tusker 

Posted: 07 June 2010
Word Count: 7


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pickled onion

a tear

wince

a smile






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FelixBenson at 16:08 on 07 June 2010
HaHa. I love this as much as I love pickled onions. No haiku expert, but surely you have cracked it? - Now you have made me think about how eating a pickled onion is just like life...! Well done.

Nella at 16:29 on 07 June 2010
Good, Jennifer!! Those very bare bones of a poem say so much. I love Kirsty's simile

Have a lovely, lovely holiday.

V`yonne at 16:30 on 07 June 2010
I think that's wonderful! I might have put the first line last but you certainly captured the experience and it's very in the moment indeed Well done you!

tusker at 16:52 on 07 June 2010
Well thanks girls!

My daughter's home made pickled onions are like that.

I'll take a notebook away with me and write a few, perhaps.

I sure will try, Robin.

Jennifer

Findy at 09:20 on 08 June 2010
Nice one Jennifer

Have a lovely time in Cornwall.

findy

tusker at 11:48 on 08 June 2010
Thanks Findy.

Jennifer

didau at 22:14 on 08 June 2010
Did someone say addictive?

speared by a fork
vinegar bites as I crunch
on pickled onions

crowspark at 15:58 on 09 June 2010
Made my eyes water, Jennifer.
Have a great holiday.

tusker at 16:16 on 09 June 2010
Thanks Bill.

Jennifer


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