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Ascension

by Bobo 

Posted: 05 December 2003
Word Count: 53


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Follow me, little one:
climb up here,
look around.
All the world's to be found
if you open your eyes
and mind.

Your cape, pure fear,
catches on the wind.
Feet falter to find
the right way
to stay
upright and focused.

Take my hand.
Hold on tight.
I am here for you.






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roovacrag at 21:21 on 05 December 2003  Report this post
Beautiful. Well thought out. xx Alice

Bobo at 17:06 on 08 December 2003  Report this post
Thanks Alice - sometimes it's easier to put these things into a poem than it is to tell someone, but I'm working on it.

BoBo x

Ticonderoga at 13:29 on 18 December 2003  Report this post

Beautifully done; simple, hopeful, affirmative. LOve your concision.

L & M,

Mike


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