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Does my head look big in this?

by Bobo 

Posted: 09 December 2003
Word Count: 50
Summary: Written in the first person but actually about the smug up-their-own-arses type I despise.
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Success -
so sweet to savour.
I'm in charge;
I lead,
you follow.
If I feel benevolent
I may spare you some crumbs -
a hint of my supremacy
for you to chew upon.
Lick your lips,
suck my tongue -
it doesn't get better than this.

Not for you.






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Account Closed at 07:16 on 10 December 2003  Report this post
Wicked! Bobo, your titles are so provocative that I couldn't resist taking a look! Not being a poetry person, i can't say more but i can see exactly where this one's coming from!!
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Fearless at 07:56 on 10 December 2003  Report this post
BoBo

Liked it. Title could also have been 'Does my arse look big with my head stuck up it?'

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Bobo at 09:07 on 10 December 2003  Report this post
Cheers guys. I think we all encounter way too many people like this day-to-day, more's the pity! Fearless, like the alternative title!

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dr_mandrill at 19:00 on 12 December 2003  Report this post
This totally strikes a chord. It sounds totally like my boss (mean spirited, ugly little joyless power junkie). I'm sure anyone who's ever been on the receiving end of condescension knows what you're saying here (with his nasty, tidy little beard and his i-liveon-adrenalin-and-caffeine-i-do coffee breath).

Good job.


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