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You Walked

by The Walrus 

Posted: 25 December 2003
Word Count: 126


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You said:
“Trust me,
I will always be there”.

You said:
“Believe me,
I will never leave you”.

You said,
“My love
Is unconditional”.

You said all this
And more,
Much more.
But for all your talk,
Your oh so eloquent words,
You walked.

You told me
I was a victim
Of my conditioning,
Not wanting to believe
My actions
Were driven
By instinct.
Nothing else.

You told me
I was shallow,
Refusing to believe
That my words
Were driven
By honesty
Nothing else.

You told me
I wasn’t prepared to fight
That I would live to regret,
Refusing to believe
That my final act
Was driven by compassion,
Nothing less.

And so,
You walked,
Leaving in your wake
The power of
Your love
Diametrically transposed.






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Fearless at 11:59 on 26 December 2003  Report this post
A great poem. I can really feel the power in this.

fearless

roovacrag at 12:49 on 26 December 2003  Report this post
Better to walk away,otherwise it will crucify you.
Ask yourself why you part and how much you want it.
Do you want it bad enough to fight for it. Good poem. xxAl

The Walrus at 18:40 on 26 December 2003  Report this post
Thanks guys.

The Walrus

Bobo at 13:39 on 29 December 2003  Report this post
Walrus - there is a strong sense of outrage in this piece which gives it a strength. However, the content contradicts this as it is riddled with the writer's neediness - very powerful juxtapositioning.

Walking away is often for the best - especially when there seems to be no viable alternative.

Be strong,

BoBo x

The Walrus at 16:52 on 01 January 2004  Report this post
Outrage and neediness... hmmm... hadn't looked at it in that way. Interesting comments. Thanks.

The Walrus

ChrisB at 14:39 on 04 January 2004  Report this post
This triggered and resonated a deep emotion inside of me.

There is pain and sadness reflected in the poem but also an underlying strengh with the words written - and ultimatley a sense of maybe forgiveness and letting go.

Soemtimes a partner can be cruel in love and sometimes they act as a mirror - but I have a feeling here than the words expressed are a reflection of themselves and their own flaws projected rather than what they can actually truly perceive.

Good poem I liked it.

C

The Walrus at 08:09 on 05 January 2004  Report this post
Thanks for your comments Chris, an interesting interpretation which made me re-read it in a different light. Thanks.

The Walrus


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