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Love to the end

by roovacrag 

Posted: 26 December 2003
Word Count: 99
Summary: Two women I know and their loves.


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What is the conclusion
of what you want.
Do you love him?
Do You really.

Should i grab you
by the scruff of your neck,
should I.
Ask do you love each other.

Feelings are hard,
feelings are broad,
feelings are deep,
feelings are tragic.

Not just sex
but love.
Not just passion
but feeling.

You have to feel,
give up all,
for love,
I did,
why shouldn't you..

Years of passion,
years of love.
Only comes round once.
take it when it comes.

Not what you want,
just happens.
Love to the end,
till death do we part.






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The Walrus at 18:39 on 26 December 2003  Report this post
A touching piece, and so true.

The Walrus
x

Fearless at 10:48 on 27 December 2003  Report this post
I echo the comments of The Walrus; it is so true. This poem captures the salient fact that it only comes round once, so must be taken at that time, no matter how inconvenient.

fearless

roovacrag at 11:50 on 27 December 2003  Report this post
hope it captures all who are not sure of love.

Bobo at 23:17 on 29 December 2003  Report this post
Alice - great writing - simple and yet so hard-hitting. Love is indeed rare - those too afraid or fickle to appreciate it really don't deserve it.

BoBo x


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