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Little ball of joy

by dharker

Posted: 04 June 2012
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Surreptitious glance
from snotty child.
Moment chosen
finger poised
bliss!
Digging for nose gold!

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Nella at 15:49 on 04 June 2012 Report this post

LOL, Dave! I can just see that. I especially like the image of the child looking around and waiting for the right moment!

Robin

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V`yonne at 17:45 on 04 June 2012 Report this post

We were bound to get a bogey one ;

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Love the title!!!

Read the WriteWords interview with Oonah Joslin (V`yonne)

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tusker at 15:08 on 05 June 2012 Report this post

Great! Loved it, Dave.

Jennifer

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dharker at 16:19 on 05 June 2012 Report this post

Thanks Robin, Oonah and Jennifer! Children just love searching for the treasure that hides up their noses - sorry to be so predictable Oonah!

Dave

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Dave Morehouse at 20:17 on 05 June 2012 Report this post

Nose fruit! I've seen it time and again in my years in elementary school. This is wonderfully funny, Dave. It proves that inspirations can come in odd places. Dave

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dharker at 08:53 on 06 June 2012 Report this post

Glad you liked it Dave!

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FelixBenson at 12:45 on 06 June 2012 Report this post

Haha! Bliss! Just the right word for this. Really made me laugh. Well captured, Dave!

Kirsty

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dharker at 12:58 on 06 June 2012 Report this post

Thanks Kirsty!

Dave

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