Login   Sign Up 



 

Charles Mingus

by James Graham 

Posted: 08 December 2014
Word Count: 83
Summary: For this week's challenge. Mingus was a jazz bass-player. The last three lines are adapted from Alice Walker, so not original.


Font Size
 


Printable Version
Print Double spaced


Charles Mingus

His music is bass purple.
When the daisy-white piano and scarlet king trumpet
have had their say

a four-beat silence
then a single thrum
a deep soft boom
a star of clematis in a shadowy corner
another, and another
each note a purple spark

Now the solo break
a drift of crocuses in sun
a drift of meteorites by night
purple fires in the upper air.

He must have walked
by the colour purple in a field somewhere
and noticed it.






Favourite this work Favourite This Author


Comments by other Members



V`yonne at 11:46 on 14 December 2014  Report this post
What a wonderful musical description James.

a four-beat silence
then a single thrum
a deep soft boom
a star of clematis in a shadowy corner
another, and another
each note a purple spark

I almost felt I could like a Jazz piece :)

Bazz at 13:59 on 14 December 2014  Report this post
Very vivid James, I love how this builds up thruming and booming, to the meditation of the solo break. (what is bass purple, though?)

James Graham at 20:48 on 14 December 2014  Report this post
' Bass purple' - a deep or dark purple, I suppose. I tried to combine the idea of a dark shade with the idea of a dark or deep sound. There's that thing that some people have - synaesthesia, where you see colours when you hear music. I don't have it, but when you first learn about it you start trying to associate instruments with colours. The trumpet is bright red, clarinet is blue, oboe is turquoise. Bass fiddle is purple.

James.

stormbox at 22:04 on 14 December 2014  Report this post
This poem inspired me to listen to the Purple Heart  - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JJR1mLL23fA - while I read it, and I could hear those notes zinging and the colours popping! Great imagery and a wonderful poem.


To post comments you need to become a member. If you are already a member, please log in .