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The Child and the Date Palm

by michwo 

Posted: 08 March 2018
Word Count: 390
Summary: A fable by Voltaire's great-nephew who died of TB in September 1794 as a result of being imprisoned during the Terror. Two other poets - André Chénier and Jean-Antoine Roucher - were guillotined in July that year.


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The Child and the Date Palm
 
Not far from the Atlas Mountains
In a desert where a hundred tribes of nomads
Freely walk with camels and their tents in bags
Ran one day a child without his footsteps counting.
The young son of a Muslim, that’s no lie,
He’d run off from a caravanserai.
While his mother was sleeping, he saw what was what.
Down in a ravine, far from dry places,
Our child discovers an oasis.
A fine date palm’s near; of dates it bears a lot.
“Oh!  What joy!” he cries out.  “These dates, this water clear,
Are mine now; without me, in this lonely place here,
These hidden treasures, unsuspected,
Would have stayed forever undetected.
But since I’ve found them, they belong to me.”
Speaking thus the child now rushes to the tree
And to its top endeavours to be raised.
The going was tough;
The bark was sometimes smooth and sometimes rough.
It caused his hands to slip or to be grazed.
Twice he fell down, but, with ardour renewed,
He around the trunk his long legs slewed
And came at last, panting and sore in the crutch,
Up to these dates that he wanted so much.
He throws himself upon the dates,
Holding on with one hand, with the other foraging,
Acknowledging
That even picked at random they are good to taste.
Suddenly our child, numbered now among our friends,
Stops to reflect and afterwards descends.
He runs to fetch his mother,
Takes charge of his younger brother,
Leads them to the palm.  The younger, bending down,
Leans against the trunk, his arms around it wraps,
Lets his brother climb upon his back.
His brother does so, then, as if from solid ground,
Effortlessly, both arms free, with nothing to endanger them,
Picks the dates and throws them down.  His mother keeps track,
Then upon a tablecloth arranges them.
The harvest once done and the table once laid,
The two brothers peaceful and contented feel,
Smile at their mother no longer afraid,
At the water’s edge enjoy a charming meal.
 
Of our society this is a reflection:
We need to share things that are not of our confection.
Hearts worthy the value of friendship to know,
Take heed of this old adage’s direction:
“Half is better than all here below.”
 
JEAN-PIERRE CLARIS DE FLORIAN (1755-1794)






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James Graham at 22:01 on 11 March 2018  Report this post
A good story, in the sense of a moral tale which isn’t too off-putting. Not at all, really. Perhaps I say that because I agree with it: whatever Nature offers, we must not claim it for ourselves – make it our property - but share with others. It reminded me of John Clare’s protests against land enclosures: ‘No Road Here’ signs so intimidating that even the wild birds knew not to go there.

The moral is nicely illustrated in the poem. We have the boy’s speech on discovering the date palm – one of those poetic speeches which are rather more sophisticated than we would expect of the character, but convey the message more than adequately. ‘They belong to me’ is emphatic, and for some time he behaves as if it were true. Then we are told, in a very engaging way, that he changes his mind:
Suddenly our child, numbered now among our friends,
Stops to reflect and afterwards descends.

Finally, we see how much better it is when the family are all together:
The harvest once done and the table once laid,
The two brothers peaceful and contented feel,
Smile at their mother no longer afraid,
At the water’s edge enjoy a charming meal.

An enjoyable piece by a poet I knew nothing about until now.

James.


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