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by Bobo 

Posted: 23 February 2004
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Soon
you'll be here
with me
and the longing will cease.

The yearning will
diminish
as if
it never was,
and my lips will smile
as I look into your eyes.

You cannot know
how much you mean
to me -
how greatly you affect
my world,
but I will try
to show you
in the creases of life's everyday.






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roovacrag at 21:26 on 23 February 2004  Report this post
Beautiful.
every word said its piece.Well done,nice to see you on ww again.You write well. xxAlice
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Fearless at 21:34 on 23 February 2004  Report this post
Woof woof Bobsy. A fitting welcome (don't burden Mister Pooch with too many expectations, will ya?).

Fearless: feel the fear, and funk it
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igbit33 at 11:44 on 24 February 2004  Report this post
'in the creases of life's everyday.' - A brilliant line. Inspired.

Iggy. xx
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roger at 19:01 on 25 February 2004  Report this post
Just come across this, Bobo, it's lovely. And, like Iggy,I think the last line especially is beautiful.
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