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TOUCH

by LONGJON 

Posted: 23 February 2004
Word Count: 16
Summary: Not strictly haiku form.
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A quiet day, grey, calm
Your hand rests lightly in mine.
Does the way lead on.






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Seahorse at 09:10 on 24 February 2004  Report this post
I am in no way any kind of expert on haikus or proper poetry but I really liked this.

I loved the last line and its inherent possibilities.

Tender, thoughtful
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LONGJON at 10:23 on 27 February 2004  Report this post
Hi Seahorse,

Many thanks for your comment, thoughtfulness is probably the essence of haiku, I think.
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