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Yesterday I Had A Chat With A Chinchilla

by Beanie Baby 

Posted: 02 March 2004
Word Count: 100


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Yesterday,
I had a chat
with a chinchilla.
He scolded me
and twittered.
He didn't look happy
in his cage
at the petshop.
He asked me why
I'd imprisoned him.
I couldn't answer.
His eyes were
starlit black
and teary sad.
All round him,
were tanks full of
crickets, chirruping
for freedom,
not knowing they're
being saved
only for a
lizard's lunch.
They all asked me
why they weren't free.
But I couldn't
answer.
Yesterday,
a chinchilla had
a chat with me.
I asked him,
"Are we so very different
in the confines of
our lives?"
He couldn't answer
either.






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miffle at 21:36 on 02 March 2004  Report this post
Beanie Baby - I liked the sentiment of this and the unexpected and very poignant twist at the end. Funny timing too - I bought a digital camera about a month ago and raised a few eyebrows taking a film ( yes, I can do short films) of a chinchilla on his wheel in Pet World...I do not like to see animals in cages - his tail was too beautiful to be confined. Write on, miffle ;-) I like 'starlit black' very much.


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