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AM I SPOILT?
Posted: 12 April 2004
Word Count: 39
Summary: Appreciation of a doting family.
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I am a little girl,
yes I am.
Sit to the table
eat my jam,
count my numbers
1-2-3.
Love my daddy
can't you see,
seven brothers older than me
What A life,
spoilt little girl,
that's me.
;0)
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 Skeetr at 23:02 on 12 April 2004
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Oh! I want her life! Can I do a changling-thing... Pllleeeaaase!!
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The Walrus at 08:06 on 13 April 2004
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Cute poem Stan. Love the rhythm - sort of sing songy and just how a little girl would talk. Did you mean to leave out a question mark in the title? Also, is the girl in question spoilt or appreciative?
The Walrus
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Fearless at 08:58 on 13 April 2004
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I concur with La Walrus. However, as my narcotic sleigh ride kicks in, the quote:
'seven brothers older than me'
Has actually made me reconsider the relationship between Snowhite and her seven dwarves. I think I will ponder on that, while I -
[Comments edited for a reduction in depravity]
Fearless
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roovacrag at 10:22 on 13 April 2004
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Thank you all for comments.
Red.
Sorry ,yes i missed the question mark out and added a doting family.
Woz.
My mum had seven brothers,so was a good round number.
xx Al
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miffle at 15:25 on 15 April 2004
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Alice, Loved this little number. Rhythm perfect and unusual. Love the way that you've captured the voice of a little girl - full of attitude and lots of love too - that's for sure. Loved 'sit to the table/ eat my jam' Made me smile... Sounds like she's on her best behaviour there! 'spoilt' in a good way and she knows it... Reminded me of my brother... Enjoyed it very much, Miffle ;-)
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poemsgalore at 18:14 on 15 April 2004
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Hi Alice
I really enjoyed this, reminded me a bit of those Victorian moral verses, you know what I mean? Very cute and pleasant to read but with a deep meaning behind it.
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