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Where the heart is?

by joanie 

Posted: 15 April 2004
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the back of your fingers
butterfly wings
on my cheek

and
I
am
home -






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roovacrag at 16:12 on 15 April 2004  Report this post
So few words,with so much feeling.
No need for words just a touch says it all.
well done.
xx Alice
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Skeetr at 17:27 on 15 April 2004  Report this post
Short & sweet, joanie -- the spare wording and feel of a haiku.

Good stuff,

Smith
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joanie at 18:52 on 15 April 2004  Report this post
Thanks, Alice and Smith. I appreciate your comments.
joanie
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Nell at 07:29 on 16 April 2004  Report this post
Hi joanie,

Beautiful. Did you know that a butterfly kiss is the feel of someone's eyelashes on your cheek? I'd forgotten that, but this reminded me.

Nell.
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joanie at 07:46 on 16 April 2004  Report this post
Thank you Nell. Yes, I remember my Dad used to give me butterfly kisses! Thanks as always for your response.
joanie
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