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Someday

by Rai15 

Posted: 26 April 2004
Word Count: 172


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Those eyes,
what do they hide?
Do they hide unspoken pain, or
a tear shed in love?
It’s so easy to forget it all,
when I’m lost gazing into
those beautiful eyes.

That smile,
it ends a thousand heartbreaks.
A smile that always brings a laugh,
a laugh that in turn
always warms the soul.
Watching you contently
makes my spirit smile.

Your hold,
so sweet yet rare
Just perfect, not too tall
and never smothering.
Close my eyes and drift away,
I’m safe with you,
protected by your embrace.

Just you,
in all your eccentric ways
but you’re not so strange to me.
Your personality shines,
through the thickness of night,
in you a comfort I find.

I can’t dream,
because my body won’t sleep,
my heart cannot settle,
with asphyxiating anxiety
I lay, encasing butterflies,
because you’re not here.

Love, something that brings us all
pathetically sobbing
to our knees.
But still I get back up again,
trying to stand.
Because of a far off thought,
that may never be.






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roovacrag at 15:49 on 26 April 2004  Report this post
Rai,

This is all consuming in the words .
Like seeing someone who was once a person,but just a shell.
Still beautiful,still gentle,but lost.
Still there,but not seeing still alive.
Still loved to the full, by all.
xxAlice

Nell at 19:28 on 26 April 2004  Report this post
Beautiful Rai.

Rai15 at 19:54 on 26 April 2004  Report this post
Thank you both very much, it was my first attempt at something like this, so I am very glad it had been well recieved! :)

-Rai-

The Walrus at 20:22 on 26 April 2004  Report this post
Wow, this is raw stuff Rai and good. It really reaches out, encapsulating a feeling that few can be foreign to.

Good piece.

The Walrus


Rai15 at 20:51 on 26 April 2004  Report this post
Thank you very much.

-rai-

Rai15 at 20:51 on 26 April 2004  Report this post
Thank you very much.

-rai-

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Not sure why this came up twice...

joanie at 06:52 on 27 April 2004  Report this post
I enjoyed this, rai - lovely. I liked the opening of each stanza, which sort of leads the reader in... The last stanza is very real - always hoping despite desperation. joanie

Rai15 at 15:20 on 27 April 2004  Report this post
Thank you, joanie, for your comments, they're very much appreciated :)

-rai-


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